so... yes. wrote this one thinking back to events at the beginning of the middle of last week. ... yah... doesn't really seem done, wish i could add more, but nothing sounded good after that last line i wrote, so... maybe there'll be a second installation later in life... we'll see. Doesn't really have a title yet either... yah.


i don't
feel me
anymore.
don't
touch me
on the surface nothing shows.
i can't
hear me
nothing comes in
my ears are
empty
stuffed
with invisible cotton
that only
I can feel.

1 Comments:

At 9/27/2005,  Anonymous said...

Ah, CRAP! all the indents are fucked up!! noooo!!! they were so cool, to... oh well... this is the slightly-less-cool version of the poem, then... sorry guys... :(

anyone know how to make the indents show up?

 

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