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Wednesday, October 05, 2005
see me, feel me, touch me, feel me
so... yes... slightly influenced by one of The Who's songs...
See Me
i don't
feel me
anymore.
don't
touch me
on the surface nothing shows.
i can't
hear me
nothing comes in
my ears are
empty
stuffed
with invisible cotton
that only
I can feel.
See Me
i don't
anymore.
don't
on the surface nothing shows.
i can't
nothing comes in
my ears are
stuffed
with invisible cotton
that only
2 Comments:
ha, omg, i just realized i already posted this poem on here... BUT this one has the right indents! yay!! this is what it was SUPPOSED to look like, not the other entry... yah.
I love it! It's so....cool. And it needs no point - it's perfect. Have you read it at a lit meeting yet?
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